money gift for wedding 1
학생이 쓴 원문
The fall is wedding season. And my age is the marrige one.
So some of my friends are going to get married in this fall.
Of course I am very happy about their wedding. and I am willing to congratulate to them.
But the money gift for wedding is not great guest.
Sometimes it is big pressure to me. In addtion, I have no plan to get married yet. So frankly, I begrudge it. If I don't get married in the future, can I get back my money? Maybe not.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name],
Congratulations to the newly weds! Yeah I heard that it was customary to give money for the newlyweds, unlike in other countries where in you can give anything that the couple could use for their life together. Hope you enjoy the wedding ceremonies though! :)
-T.Dominic-
The fall is wedding season.
>>Fall is the wedding season.
And my age is the marrige one.
>>And my age is the marriage age. So some of my friends are going to get married in this fall.
>>So some of my friends are going to get married this fall. Of course I am very happy about their wedding. and I am willing to congratulate to them.
>>Of course I am very happy about their wedding and I am willing to congratulate them. But the money gift for wedding is not great guest.
>>But the money for the wedding gift is not great for the guest. [or is not good news for the guest]t is big pressure to me.
>>It's a big pressure for me.
In addtion, I have no plan to get married yet.
>>In addition, I have no plans of getting married yet.
So frankly, I begrudge it.
>>CORRECT
If I don't get married in the future, can I get back my money? Maybe not.
>>If I don't get married in the future, can I get my money back? Maybe not.
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