Money is most need thing
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If I were a born to be rich, my parents they are learning to me how to use moeny good well.
But If I were a poor and suddenly to be rich, it\'s very dangerous.
I don\'t know how to use money and I won\'t have any economic ideas either.
Money is most need thing but if I don\'t have enough knowledge, really dangerous.
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Hi Ann:)
Yes, we need to be wise with handling money. It can be very powerful and controlling.
If I were a born to be rich, my parents they are learning to me how to use moeny good well.
>> If I was born rich, my parents would teach me how to handle money well.
But If I were a poor and suddenly to be rich, it\'s very dangerous.
>> But if I were poor, I would want to be rich which can be dangerous.
I don\'t know how to use money and I won\'t have any economic ideas either.
>> I won\'t know how to properly use money and I won\'t have any economic ideas for myself.
Money is most need thing but if I don\'t have enough knowledge, really dangerous.
>> Money is something that we need but if I don\'t have enough knowledge to handle it, it can be dangerous.
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