Money is the biggest motivator of people at the workplace. Agree or not? Explain your answer.
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I know, it really depends on the person.
I also agree that money shouldn\'t be the only reason for working.
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It depends on the person but I personally think that\'s not true.
>> CORRECT
For instance, people that I know work not because of money but because of the fun while working.
>> CORRECT
That\'s why even if the salary is low they\'re still doing it as a job having fun.
>> That\'s why even if the salary is low they\'re still having fun at work.
Money is important but it shouldn\'t be the only reason that you work.
>> Money is important but it shouldn\'t be the only reason why you work.
>> OR: Money is important but it shouldn\'t be the only reason for working.
In my opinion, a passion of your own work should be the biggest motivator in the workplace.
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