Money is the biggest motivator of people at the workplace. Agree or not? Explain your answer.

2018-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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It depends on the person but I personally think that's not true. For instance, people that I know work not because of money but because of the fun while working. That's why even if the salary is low they're still doing it as a job having fun. Money is important but it shouldn't be the only reason that you work. In my opinion, a passion of your own work should be the biggest motivator in the workplace.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

I know, it really depends on the person.

I also agree that money shouldn\'t be the only reason for working.

So much wisdom coming from a teenager like you ^^

You are simply amazing ♥

I\'ll see you tomorrow ☺


It depends on the person but I personally think that\'s not true.

>> CORRECT


For instance, people that I know work not because of money but because of the fun while working.

>> CORRECT


That\'s why even if the salary is low they\'re still doing it as a job having fun.

>> That\'s why even if the salary is low they\'re still having fun at work.


Money is important but it shouldn\'t be the only reason that you work.

>> Money is important but it shouldn\'t be the only reason why you work.

>> OR: Money is important but it shouldn\'t be the only reason for working.


In my opinion, a passion of your own work should be the biggest motivator in the workplace.

>>  CORRECT

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