money management
학생이 쓴 원문
I have managed my money since 20 years.
Actually I used up a lot of money for unuseful things such as drinking alchohol , buying clothes(impulsive buying) or savory snacks.
I can not push a rope now .
After reading a book which is written for money management by Mr. [Name] duk-sung, I could know that my life depends on money.
Even though money is not everything, how to control my money flow is very important.
It decides my life quality.
But only saving is not the answer.
I have to divide into several parts with other portions.
I invest 10% money of my income in self development and use 20% of it for my later years as retirement savings in accordance with his statement.
I struggle to refrain from buying something unuseful on impulse and study the efficient way of money contol and read economy flow through global news.
The key is to find right one to me.
강사 첨삭
Thank you so much for letting me read your homework.^^
I guess you are wise when it comes to money.
You had tried reading books and having a bunch of information before you decide on what you have to do with it.^^
Take care always and see you soon.^^
--- T. Anne
I have managed my money since 20 years.
>> I have managed my money since when I was 20 years old.Actually I used up a lot of money for unuseful things such as drinking alchohol , buying clothes(impulsive buying) or savory snacks.
>> Correct!I can not push a rope now .
>> Correct!After reading a book which is written for money management by Mr. [Name] duk-sung, I could know that my life depends on money.
>> After reading a book which is written for money management by Mr. [Name] duk-sung, I had known that my life depends on money.Even though money is not everything, how to control my money flow is very important.
>> Correct!It decides my life quality.
>> Correct!But only saving is not the answer.
>> Saving is not only the answer.I have to divide into several parts with other portions.
>> I have to divide it into several portions.I invest 10% money of my income in self development and use 20% of it for my later years as retirement savings in accordance with his statement.
>> Correct!I struggle to refrain from buying something unuseful on impulse and study the efficient way of money contol and read economy flow through global news.
>> Correct!
The key is to find right one to me.
>> The key is to find the right one for me.
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