Money's history

Many years ago, many people used the other things instead of money in different area. First, in hot area people used salt instead of money. Salt keep food from going bad. Second, in cold area people used grain instead of money. people don't have nothing to eat because the cold weather can't grow the grain. For last, far away from sea area, people used seashell instead of money, because they thought that they were beautiful. But now, we use creditcard, bill, and coins.

Hi [이름]! Good job on this one!:) Here are your corrections-Teacher JM   Many years ago, many people used the other things instead of money in different area.>>>Many years ago in different areas, many people used materials instead of money.First, in hot area people used salt instead of money. >>>First of all in hot areas, people used salt in replacement of money.Salt keep food from going bad.>>>Salt preserves food from going bad.Second, in cold area people used grain instead of money. >>>Second, in cold areas people used grain as a form of money. people don't have nothing to eat because the cold weather can't grow the grain.>>>People don't have anything to eat because the cold weather isn't conducive for the growth of grain.For last, far away from sea area, people used seashell instead of money, because they thought that they were beautiful.>>>lastly, far away from sea shore, people used seashelsl instead of money because they thought that they were beautiful.But now, we use creditcard, bill, and coins. >>>But now, we use credit cards, bill, and coins.