Money that should be used in the short term was saved in the short term.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don’t save money every day. Until last year, I paid off my debts when I had money.
Of course, money that should be used in the short term was saved in the short term.
I tend to spend money according to a set pattern. I get a salary once a month. I think saving money means spending less money. Anyway I had paid off all my debts last year. These days, I prefer to buy stocks rather than save in the bank because the interest rates are very low. I think that long-term investments in stable companies will generate profits.
That’s all for today! see you next class.
강사 첨삭
Hello Elliot!
Good job on another well-written homework! I totally agree with you! Saving means spending less, or maybe earning more... How I wish I can also invest in stocks and grow my money there, but alas! I do not even have seed money. I hope your investments are growing well despite the current conflicts.
Have a great weekend!
-Teacher Violet
I don’t save money every day.
>> CORRECT!
Until last year, I paid off my debts when I had money.
>> CORRECT!
Of course, money that should be used in the short term was saved in the short term.
>> CORRECT!
I tend to spend money according to a set pattern.
>> CORRECT!
I get a salary once a month.
>> CORRECT!
I think saving money means spending less money.
>> CORRECT!
Anyway I had paid off all my debts last year.
>>Anyway, I had paid off all my debts last year.
These days, I prefer to buy stocks rather than save in the bank because the interest rates are very low.
>> CORRECT!
I think that long-term investments in stable companies will generate profits.
>> CORRECT!
That’s all for today!
>> CORRECT!
see you next class.
>> See you next class.
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