Moon man next story
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Next in the story i think the moon man will go to the other planets. So jack and annie will follow the austronaut. So thry will race, do games and who is the jump far away. And all win, they will give the prize.
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Next in the story i think the moon man will go to the other planets.
>> I think the moon man will go to the other planets next.
So jack and annie will follow the austronaut.
>> And the, Jack and Annie will follow the astronaut.
So thry will race, do games and who is the jump far away.
>> They will race, do games and jump far away.
And all win, they will give the prize.
>> They will all win and win the prize.
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