Morality
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Jay,
What is wrong and right had been instilled in us as soon as we are born into the world. Thus, what is moral varies from person to person. Good job on your composition today. Keep it up!(\",)
~Lynn
It is difficult to define exactly what morality is but we know how important morality is in our society.
>> correct!
In macroscopic veiw point, people have been learned about morality since they were elementary students and this morality has universal meaing like bullying and stealing are bad things.
>> In macroscopic view point, people have been learning about morality since they were elementary students and this morality has universal meaning like bullying and stealing are bad things.
However, it is a so complicated problem in microscopic veiw point.
>> However, it is a complicated problem in microscopic view point.
People have lived in different environmenets and they have been exeperienced different things and of course, they have their own standards for morality.
>> People have lived in different environments and they have experienced different things and of course, they have their own standards for morality.
For example, if there was a old woman who was standing in the bus and all the seats were occupied.
>> For example, if there is an old woman who was standing in the bus and all the seats were occupied.
But, no one gave their seats to old woman.
>> But, no one gave their seat to the old woman.
For this matter, some people would say it is immoral but also some people could say why it is immoral?
>> correct!
Like this instance, definition of morality can be diffferent to people but we should follow universal morality.
>> In this example, the definition of morality can be different from people to people but we should follow the universal morality.
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