Morals or money? Which one would you choose? Explain.

2023-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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If possible, I want both of them above, however, if I had to choose one of them, I’d select morals. That\'s because if I lose money, I just lose only money, which I can recover anytime. On the contrary, if I lose morals, I could lose more things, let alone money. See, who would like to do business with an unreliable businessman? It’s so sure that businessmen without morals will lose many chances to make money. That\'s why a business should be based on reciprocal trust. If we put more value on money than morals, we would end up losing both money and business. However, if we cherish reliable business relations more than profits, we could sustain good partners and profits. Therefore, we have to be wise when we have to choose between morals and money.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Steve. Wishing you a warm Wednesday. ^_^
T. Irene
If possible, I want both of them above, however, if I had to choose one of them, I’d select morals. 
>>> Correct. 
That\'s because if I lose money, I just lose only money, which I can recover anytime. 
>>> Correct. 
OR
>>> That\'s because if I lose money, I just lose money, which I can recover anytime. 
On the contrary, if I lose morals, I could lose more things, let alone money. 
>>> On the contrary, if I lose my morals, I could lose more things than money. 
See, who would like to do business with an unreliable businessman? 
>>> Correct.  
It’s so sure that businessmen without morals will lose many chances to make money.
>>> I\'m a hundred percent sure that businessmen without morals will lose many chances to make money.
That\'s why a business should be based on reciprocal trust. 
>>> Correct. 
If we put more value on money than morals, we would end up losing both money and business. 
>>> Correct. 
However, if we cherish reliable business relations more than profits, we could sustain good partners and profits. 
>>> However, if we cherish reliable business relations more than profits, we could sustain good partnerships and profits. 
Therefore, we have to be wise when we have to choose between morals and money.
>>> Correct.


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