More hard study for english

2022-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I\'m not greedy. I wish I could speak English better than now. My personality is ver bright but language level is not good. Especialy grammer level is very low. I know that and I should try study to hard. But these day so busy.....

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann!

Maybe it\'s time for us to focus on your book this time so we can enhance your grammar skills. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I\'m not greedy.

>> CORRECT

I wish I could speak English better than now.

>> I wish I could speak in English much better than now.

My personality is ver bright but language level is not good.

>> My personality is very bright but my speaking skills is not good.

Especialy grammer level is very low.

>> My grammar is especially low.

I know that and I should try study to hard.

>> I know that I should try to study hard but I have been so busy these days.

But these day so busy.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

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