Most artist earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for
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Teacher Travis.
As you know, most of the artist earn low salaries just in case they are not famous artist or don’t have specific master pieces.
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>>OR: Most artist that has no specific master piece earn low salary.
There are so many artists to continue their work with enthusiasm although it’s hard to get stable salary.
>>There are so many artists who continue their work with enthusiasm although it\'s hard to get a stable salary.
I have been thinking that the funding from the government is necessary to people who are eager to contribute their artistic works.
>>I\'ve been thinking that the fund from the government is necessary to people who are eager to contribute their artistic works.
It leads on development of the artistic field in our country.
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Therefore it is important to distribute the funding to those who have affection about their works.
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Otherwise, our precious budget from country would be abused.
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>>OR: Otherwise, our precious from the country will abuse.
So I agree that artists who earn a few salary should receive the funding from the government if the related regulation that giving them money would be making well.
>>Correct.
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