most beautiful continents~
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Most beautiful continents is Asia and Europe..^^
>> The most beautiful continents are Asia and Europe.
Asia: Because i live in Asia~ i think Japan and pilippines food is delicious~
>> I chose Asia because I live in Asia. I think Japanese and Filipino food are delicious.
Europe: Europe like France and England..
>> I chose Europe like France and England.
{France famous Eiffel tower is so beautiful in night~^^}
>> France\'s famous Eiffel tower is so beautiful at night.
[England tower is so beautiful]
>> England\'s tower is so beautiful.
This is my most beautiful continents~^^
>> These are the most beautiful continents for me.
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