Most Dangerous Predator in the world
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Theme: [ESSAY] What do you think is the most dangerous predator in the world? Why?
I think it is Black Mamba.
It is largest poisonous snake in Africa.
And it can run faster than people.
Black Mamba is very poisonous snake so I think it\'s the most dangerous predator in the world.
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Theme: [ESSAY] What do you think is the most dangerous predator in the world? Why?
I think it is Black Mamba.
>> or: As far as I know, it\'s the Black Mamba.
It is largest poisonous snake in Africa.
>> It is the largest poisonous snake in Africa.
And it can run faster than people.
>> or: Also, it can run faster than humans.
Black Mamba is very poisonous snake so I think it\'s the most dangerous predator in the world.
>> Black Mamba is an extremely venomous snake so I think it\'s the most dangerous predator in the world.
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