Most exciting jobs and the most boring job.

2016-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was a young, I wanted to be a newspaper reporter. Everyone has a dream. I also had a dream, too. I accomplished my childhood dream. Reporters watch out and criticize the government. And the reporter realizes social justice, protects the weak. The prosecution's power gives from a government, whereas the press supports from the people. So people calls that the press is a 'watch dog'. The professor is one of the most exciting jobs. Because they study on new areas with intellectual curiosity. Many scholars also research to study new areas. Therefore society processes and develops. Of course, many other jobs contribute to social deveopment, too. But I think emotional jobs is hard to work. Because it match other person's feeling. It's the most boring and hard.

강사 첨삭

Hi sir,

Everybody has a dream but often times because of one reason or another we aren\'t able to realize those dreams. So people who have the means are really lucky because they can achieve their dreams. On the other hand, if you are really driven then you\'ll make a way to achieve your dream. See you later sir!

Take care!

 

When I was a young, I wanted to be a newspaper reporter.

>>correct!

Everyone has a dream.

>>correct!

I also had a dream, too.

>>I also had a dream./ I had a dream too.

I accomplished my childhood dream.

>>correct!

Reporters watch out and criticize the government.

>>correct!

And the reporter realizes social justice, protects the weak.

>>correct!

The prosecution\'s power gives from a government, whereas the press supports from the people.

>>The prosecution\'s power is given from the government, whereas the press gets its support  from the people.

So people calls that the press is a \'watch dog\'.

>>So people call the press as a \'watch dog\'.

The professor is one of the most exciting jobs.

>>Being a professor is one of the most exciting jobs.

Because they study on new areas with intellectual curiosity.

>>correct!

Many scholars also research to study new areas.

>>correct!

Therefore society processes and develops.

>>correct!

Of course, many other jobs contribute to social development, too.

>>correct!

But I think emotional jobs is hard to work.

>>But I think jobs that requires emotion is hard.

Because it match other person\'s feeling.

>>Because it matches the other person\'s feeling.

It\'s the most boring and hard.

>>It\'s the most boring and the hardest.

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