Most Favorite thing
학생이 쓴 원문
What did you like most about living in New York?
The favorite things same down contents.
First, I like that a lot of talking with neighbor.
I walked with my dog and talked with neighbor.
Second, I like dateting with my two sons.
I open ate various foods with my First son. and
I did tea dateting with second son on weekend.
Third, American like to hug with friends and
family. andthen, me too.
Forths, many people was like to me about my dream.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir Ko! It seems that New York is a much sociable place to live in than in Korea. I heard most of my Korean students don\'t even know who their neighbors are.
The favorite things same down contents.
>>> The favorite things are the same with the following;
First, I like that a lot of talking with neighbor.
>>> The favorite things are the same with the following;
First, I like that a lot of talking with neighbor.
>>> First, I like that there\'s a lot of talking with neighbors.
I walked with my dog and talked with neighbor.
>>> correct
Second, I like dateting with my two sons.
>>> correct
Second, I like dateting with my two sons.
>>> Second, I like dating with my two sons.
>> OR: Second, I like going on dates with my two sons.
I open ate various foods with my First son. and I did tea dateting with second son on weekend.
>>> I often ate various foods with my first son and I did tea dates with my second son on weekends.
>>> I often ate various foods with my first son and I did tea dates with my second son on weekends.
Third, American like to hug with friends and family. and then, me too.
>>> Third, Americans like to hug with friends and family. So do I.
>>> Third, Americans like to hug with friends and family. So do I.
Forths, many people was like to me about my dream.
>>> Forth, many people were like me about having a dream.
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