Most Important attitude at work
학생이 쓴 원문
I think most important attitude at work is consider mind with member of Team.
Office life is can make result better than teamwork, like school days.
If We don\'t have teamwork. We can\'t anything.
Human is social animal.
Best of attitude is humble.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ethan!
Truly, humility is vital in the work place specially if you know less about something or even if you know a lot. Team work or group dynamics is very crucial in accomplishing tasks. Since everyone is a professional, he or she is expected to contribute in an orderly manner while thinking about the welfare of the other colleagues.
Thank you so much for this homework answer. You have good views about the topic.
See you again soon!
-T. Donna =)
I think most important attitude at work is consider mind with member of Team.
>> I think that the most important attitude at work is considering the mind of the members of Team.
Office life is can make result better than teamwork, like school days.
>> Office life can make better results than teamwork, like during the school days.
If We don\'t have teamwork. We can\'t anything.
>> If we don\'t have teamwork, we can\'t do anything.
Human is social animal.
>> Human is a social animal.
Or: Human beings are social animals.
Best of attitude is humble.
>> The best attitude is to be humble.
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