Most important goal of Education

2023-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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I think the most important goal of education is to bring up the students as good future citizens. Of course it is very important for students to acquire some useful information or knowledge, but more important is to build some values or virtues such as cooperation, etiquette, citizenship and contribution to the community.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Ki Yeon!
Practice is always the key!
-Hanna ^^
I think the most important goal of education is to bring up the students as good future citizens.
>>Correct.
Of course it is very important for students to acquire some useful information or knowledge, but more important is to build some values or virtues such as cooperation, etiquette, citizenship and contribution to the community.
>>Of course it is very important for students to acquire some useful information or knowledge, but it is more important to build some values or virtues such as cooperation, etiquette, citizenship and contribution to the community.

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