Most Interesting Thing
학생이 쓴 원문
During my vacation, I played Sid meier\'s civilization for the first time. It was a game that I want to play. This game is that I become a leader of each civilization and lead the civilization. My choice can change the rise and fall of civilization. I palyed as korean leader, [이름]deok. I made korea into the best science country in the world. I hope korea become the best science country in real.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름] U!
Wow! It sounds like a fun game. Thank you for writing your homework! ^^
Regarding your homework, please note that proper nouns like Korea are always written in capital letters.
Wow! It sounds like a fun game. Thank you for writing your homework! ^^
Regarding your homework, please note that proper nouns like Korea are always written in capital letters.
Overall, you did a great job! See you tomorrow~
-T.Jhozel
1. During my vacation, I played Sid meier\'s civilization for the first time.
>> I played Sid Meier\'s Civilization for the first time while on vacation.
>> I played Sid Meier\'s Civilization for the first time while on vacation.
It was a game that I want to play.
>> It was a game I wanted to play.
This game is that I become a leader of each civilization and lead the civilization.
>> In this game, I take the role of the leader of each civilization and manage it.
My choice can change the rise and fall of civilization.
>> My decision could affect how civilization develops and declines.
I palyed as korean leader, [이름]deok.
>> I played [이름]deok, a Korean leader.
I made korea into the best science country in the world.
>> I turned Korea into the world\'s leading scientific nation.
I hope korea become the best science country in real.
>>I hope to see Korea truly become the world\'s best science nation.
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