Most memorable in my life

Hi^^ this task that you're given gives deep concern to me. What a most memorable in my life it is! But It's so funny&happy, as usual. Most memorable in my life when I saw my husband, I heard bell in my ear. As soon as I & my husband saw, We love each other. It has passed two years. My husband proposed me, We were married. My husband younger than I one year. He is my one of my friend's younger brother. But My friend did not introduce me her brother. Her brother & I didn't know each other until that time. 2 years ago, I want to exam for hospital enterance. By accidently, I stay at a friend's in Seoul city.(that time I live another city) We met first time. We started to love. I think it is a fate. Cause I don't forget that day.

Hi! I enjoyed reading your essay. You are very expressive. I am so happy for you and I hope you\'ll have more good memories to treasure. Here are the corrections for your composition. T.Aurora Hi^^ this task that you\'re given gives deep concern to me. >>> This task you\'ve given me made a deep impression on me.What a most memorable in my life it is! >>> What a memorable thing in my life it is.But it\'s so funny&happy, as usual. >>> But it\'s so funny and it makes me happy as usual.Most memorable in my life>>> The memorable thing in my life was.when I saw my husband, I heard bell in my ear. >>>When I first saw my husband, I heard a bell ringing in my ear.As soon as I & my husband saw, We love each other. >>>As soon as my  husband and I saw each other, we fell in love.It has passed two years. >>> Two years have passed since then.My husband proposed me, We were married. >>> My husband proposed to me and then we got married.My husband younger than I one year. >>> My husband is younger than me for one year. He is my one of my friend\'s younger brother. >>> correctBut My friend did not introduce me her brother. >>> But my friend did not introduce me to her brother. Her brother & I didn\'t know each other until that time. >>> correct2 years ago, I want to exam for hospital enterance. >>>2 years ago, I wanted to take an exam for a job in the hospital.By accidently, I stay at a friend\'s in Seoul city.(that time I live another city) >>>By accident, I stayed at a friend\'s house in Seoul city (that time I was living in another city.)We met first time. We started to love. I think it is a fate. >>>When we met the first time. We fell in love. I think it was fate.Cause I don\'t forget that day. >>>so I can\'t forget that day.