most passionate it
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
HAPPY MONDAY!
Thank you so much Mrs. [Name] for doing your homework today.
We have the same likes!
I\'m looking forward to talking to you this week.
~Teacher Eve.
I am in an exercise as my health getting worse
>> I have to exercise as my health is getting worse.
I have been interested in the food and exercise
>> I have been interested in food and exercise.
there is one thing more it is fashion
>> There is another thing, it is fashion.
as I approach middle age my body type has changed
>> As I approach middle age, my body type is changing.
I started to find cloths what suits me and then it drew my interest
>> I started to find clothes that suits me and it drew my interest.
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