Most valuable thing
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s very philosophy.
I think most valuable thing is happiness.
To be happy it needs effort.
Have to having positive mind, earning the money and spending funny time.
강사 첨삭
I love your answer, Emily! I totally agree with you! I hope you stay positive and happy no matter what! See you!-Faith-
It\'s very philosophy.
>> It\'s about one\'s philosophy.
I think most valuable thing is happiness.
>> I think the most valuable thing is happiness.
To be happy it needs effort.
To be happy it needs effort.
>> CORRECT
OR Happiness requires effort.
Have to having positive mind, earning the money and spending funny time.
Have to having positive mind, earning the money and spending funny time.
>> You have to have a positive mind, stable income and fun time.
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