Mother
학생이 쓴 원문
My mother majored pottery and now she is a teacher in art class. She was a kindergarten teacher before I was born.
Her favorite color is white and love animals.
My mother is good at cooking. Kimchi-soup is especially good.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Annie!
You have an amazing mom!
Thank you for this!
Aki~
My mother majored pottery and now she is a teacher in art class. >>> CORRECT
She was a kindergarten teacher before I was born.
>>> CORRECT
Her favorite color is white and love animals.
Her favorite color is white and love animals.
>>> CORRECT
My mother is good at cooking.
My mother is good at cooking.
>>> CORRECT
Kimchi-soup is especially good.
>>> Her Kimchi-soup is especially good.
>>> Kimchi-soup is her specialty.
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