Mother Teresa is my best role model.
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, there are many characters.
Among them, Mother Teresa is a special person I was interested in.
She is a nun. She also won the Nobel Peace Prize.
I think she\'s like an angel spreading love for God.
So she is my best of best role model.
She had worked for the dying poor in India.
I want to live as a Christian who conveys love like her.
강사 첨삭
H[이름]!
You did a really good job today.
It shows that you are passionate about the topic.
It brought our your knowledge and skill.
Keep up the good work!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Of course, there are many characters.
>> Of course, there are many inspirational figures.
Among them, Mother Teresa is a special person I was interested in.
Among them, Mother Teresa is a special person I was interested in.
>> Among them, Mother Teresa was a special person I was interested in.
She is a nun.
She is a nun.
>> She was a nun.
She also won the Nobel Peace Prize.
>> Correct
I think she\'s like an angel spreading love for God.
I think she\'s like an angel spreading love for God.
>> Correct
So she is my best of best role model.
So she is my best of best role model.
>> So, she is the best of the best role models.
She had worked for the dying poor in India.
She had worked for the dying poor in India.
>> Correct
I want to live as a Christian who conveys love like her.
I want to live as a Christian who conveys love like her.
>> Correct
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