Motivation to study hard!
학생이 쓴 원문
I envy people who are smart and study hard.
So when I meet them and talk to them, I am stimulated to learn anything and study hard.
Moreover, I think that I should always learn and do research as much as I am a teacher.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Your patterns are getting better every day.
I hope you continue developing as a writer and a speaker.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
~~ Teacher Sharon
I envy people who are smart and study hard.
>> I envy people who are smart and who study hard.
So when I meet them and talk to them, I am stimulated to learn anything and study hard.
So when I meet them and talk to them, I am stimulated to learn anything and study hard.
>> Correct
Moreover, I think that I should always learn and do research as much as I am a teacher.
Moreover, I think that I should always learn and do research as much as I am a teacher.
>> Correct
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