motto in life
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Jay,
That\'s a good motto. You are right, sometimes things just don\'t go where you want it to go no matter how much you try to. If that happens, just let it go or go with the flow.
~Lynn
I have a motto in my life that is \"It doesn\'t matter if something will not flow to where I intended it to flow.
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OR>> My motto in life is \"It doesn\'t matter if something will not flow to where I intended it to flow\".
This sentence is important to me and it makes my thoughts and attitude for my life.
>> This is important to me since this is my attitude about life.
You know, there are so many unexpected incidents in the life and it could affect my life negatively.
>> You know, there are so many unexpected incidents in life and it could affect my life negatively.
If I hadn\'t had this motto, I would have had difficult in solving many problems.
>> If I hadn\'t had this motto, I would have had difficulty in solving many problems.
When something happened and I realized that it was beyond my force, of course, I try to solve this problem hard by myself.
>> When something happens and I realized that it was beyond my control, of course, I try to solve this problem hard by myself.
However, if I felt I have no power to manage it, I would adapt to this situation and find other methods to go ahead rather than get a stress from that.
>> However, if I feel I\'m powerless to manage it, I would adapt to this situation and find other methods to solve it rather than get a stress from that.
This motto will not change, unless there are special happenings that can affect my thoughts.
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