Mountain
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to climb Songni mountain this season.
Because close to my town. And that place has wonderful scenery.
Above all, the reason I like it has many restaurant with delicious food near the mountain.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Emily! That sounds really exciting! I hope you could climb Songni mountain and have fun!-Faith-
I want to climb Songni mountain this season. Because close to my town.
>> I want to climb Songni mountain this season because it is close to my town.
And that place has wonderful scenery.
>> Also that place has a wonderful scenery.
Above all, the reason I like it has many restaurant with delicious food near the mountain.
>> Above all, the reason why I like it is because it has many restaurants with delicious food near there.
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