mountain or sea
학생이 쓴 원문
actually i liked beach more t[이름] mountain. Because i thought that hiking is too hard. So i didn\'t even hiking. And then oneday, i had to do hiking. At that time l felt really bad. But when l reached the top of mountain, l could feel the sense of accomplishment and pleasure.
Sea is just beautiful. but it can\'t give me the happiness which is from the challenge. but i think they all have their own charm.
But! i still love sea more!
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Stella ^^
The sea is really beautiful especially watching the sunrise and sunset. ^^
Anyways, T[이름]k you for writing your homework! See you later!
-T.Jhozel
actually i liked beach more t[이름] mountain,
>> Actually, I preferred the beach t[이름] the mountains.
Because i thought that hiking is too hard.
>> Because I thought hiking was too difficult.
So i didn\'t even hiking. And then oneday, i had to do hiking.
>> So, I didn\'t even go hiking. Then one day, I had to go hiking.
At that time l felt really bad.
>> I was in a bad mood at the time.
But when l reached the top of mountain, l could feel the sense of accomplishment and pleasure.
>> But when I got to the top of the mountain, I felt a sense of accomplishment and pleasure.
Sea is just beautiful. but it can\'t give me the happiness which is from the challenge.
>> The sea is just beautiful. But it cannot provide me with the joy that the challenge of hiking gives.
but i think they all have their own charm.
>> But I believe they all have their own distinct charm.
But! i still love sea more!
>> But! I still prefer the sea!
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