Mourn
학생이 쓴 원문
A pet dying is really sad.
It is something very natural to mourn a death.
We have to understand that they are mournful because of a family.
We can never imaging their death.
We must make sure we take care of them healthfully until the end.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [Name] :) You are very passionate in your class. Keep up the good work :)
~Aki:)
A pet dying is really sad.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> A pet dying makes me worried.
It is something very natural to mourn a death.
It is something very natural to mourn a death.
>>>It is something very natural to mourn for a death of someone.
We have to understand that they are mournful because of a family.
We have to understand that they are mournful because of a family.
>>> We have to understand that they are mourning because of family.
>>> We have to understand that they are mourning because they are part of the family.
We can never imaging their death.
We can never imaging their death.
>>> We can never imagine their death
We must make sure we take care of them healthfully until the end.
We must make sure we take care of them healthfully until the end.
>>> We must make sure that we take care of them properly until the end.
>>> We must make sure that they are healthy always.
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