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Good morning~! ^^ Thanks for having great classes with me. I see that you are trying to express yourself every time we talk. Keep that up! Check my corrections below. ^^

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

I have moved for 3 times.

>>> CORRECT
I was born and raised in kongju in chunchung province.

>>> I was born and raised in Kongju in Chunchung Province.
After I graduated from high school, I moved to DaeJeon where was nearby university to reduce my commute time.

>>> After I graduated from high school, I moved to DaeJeon which is nearby the university to minimize my commute time.

I lived there for about 6years till I graduated from university.

>>> CORRECT

After got a job, I moved to Songpa nearby my office in Seoul.

>>> After getting a job, I moved to Songpa nearby my office in Seoul.

4 years later, I got married and then I had a son.

>>> CORRECT

so I moved to a bigger house in peongchon where we could buy less expensive apartment than in Seoul.

>>> So I moved to a bigger house in Peongchon where we could rent less expensive apartment than in Seoul.