move into another place

2017-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Our math academy moved into another place.The lowest floor is the gym and second floor is our academy and third floor is library.And classroom is a little bigger than before.And the air conditionar is wonderful.But there is no clock in classroom.The location of the academy is not bad.And it is not far from my house.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


It\'s nice to know that your Math academy is near you.

You can just walk, right?

You also have a library, so you can just go there easily if you want to read and have a peace of mind. ^^

See you again on Thursday!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


Our math academy moved into another place.

>> Our Math academy was moved to another place.

>> or: Our Math academy was transferred to another place.


The lowest floor is the gym and second floor is our academy and third floor is library.

>> The lowest floor is the gym, the second floor is our academy, and the third floor is the library.


And classroom is a little bigger than before.

>> Our classroom is a little bigger than before.

And the air conditionar is wonderful.But there is no clock in classroom.

>> And the air conditioner is wonderful, but there is no clock in the classroom.

The location of the academy is not bad.

>> correct

And it is not far from my house.

>> correct

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