Move to new office

2010-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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I am working in Gang-Nam in Seoul. I drive my car for commute. It takes only 30 Min. from my home to the office. As I go out early in the morning to avoid rush hours, I can get to the office in time. However, I know today that the office is going to move another place. I searched the easy way to get to the new office, but I didn't think it was easy. I can't use my car because there are not enough parking place. I am pregnant now, so it's much harder to get a bus or a subway. I am going to move right next week. I am worried about that.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!   I understand that it will be a lot harder for you to travel now because you are pregnant and it’s not good for the baby if you are always stressed out.. But don’t worry, I’m sure every problem has its own solution.. I know that you will soon figure out a way to get to your new office quickly and less tiring…   I drive my car for commute. >> I drive my car in going to the office As I go out early in the morning to avoid rush hours, I can get to the office in time. >> I go out early in the morning to avoid rush hours so I can get to the office in time. However, I know today that the office is going to move another place.>> However, I know today that the office is going to move to another place. I searched the easy way to get to the new office, but I didn't think it was easy >> I searched the easiest way to get to the new office, but I don’t think it’s going to be easyI can't use my car because there are not enough parking place. >> I can't use my car because there are not enough parking space I am going to move right next week. >> I am going to move next week.

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