Moveis , Most memoiable movies,
학생이 쓴 원문
[when you go to movies? What do u do ?]
If there is a movie that the children want to watch, we go to the theater together.
It takes about 10 minutes from my home. Usually, we watch animation. While the children watch a movie, I sleep next to them. Children\'s movies are usually a little boring, right? After watching a movie, we eat at the nearby food court and come home.
[What type moveisdo you like Most memoiable movies?]
My favorite genre is a disaster movie or a comic action movie. When I was young, I preferred thriller or horror. I can\'t see a movie that makes me nervous right now. After watching a disaster movie or comic action, the stress accumulated from work and housework disappears.
The most memorable movie is the \"Exit\" that I watched last year.
It\'s a disaster movie about the explosion of gas. The actor was so good at acting that it was pitiful and funny and thrilling throughout the movie. My beloved actor Jo Jung-seok played the main character.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! This was a great essay although I need you to focus more on you sentence construction and usage of your punctuations marks. Keep up the good work. :)
-Teacher Elise
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It takes about 10 minutes from my home.
It\'s a disaster movie about the explosion of gas.
It takes about 10 minutes from my home.
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Usually, we watch animation.
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While the children watch a movie, I sleep next to them.
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Children\'s movies are usually a little boring, right?
>> CORRECT
After watching a movie, we eat at the nearby food court and come home.
>> CORRECT
My favorite genre is a disaster movie or a comic action movie.
>> My favorite genre is disaster movies or comic action movies.
When I was young, I preferred thriller or horror.
>>CORRECT
I can\'t see a movie that makes me nervous right now.
>> I can\'t see movies that makes me nervous nowadays.
After watching a disaster movie or comic action, the stress accumulated from work and housework disappears.
>> CORRECT
The most memorable movie is the \"Exit\" that I watched last year.
>> The most memorable movie I watched last year is \"Exit\"
It\'s a disaster movie about the explosion of gas.
>>CORRECT
The actor was so good at acting that it was pitiful and funny and thrilling throughout the movie.
>>The actor was so good at acting that it was pitiful, funny and thrilling throughout the movie.
My beloved actor Jo Jung-seok played the main character.
>> CORRECT
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