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2020-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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[when you go to movies? What do u do ?] If there is a movie that the children want to watch, we go to the theater together. It takes about 10 minutes from my home. Usually, we watch animation. While the children watch a movie, I sleep next to them. Children\'s movies are usually a little boring, right? After watching a movie, we eat at the nearby food court and come home. [What type moveisdo you like Most memoiable movies?] My favorite genre is a disaster movie or a comic action movie. When I was young, I preferred thriller or horror. I can\'t see a movie that makes me nervous right now. After watching a disaster movie or comic action, the stress accumulated from work and housework disappears. The most memorable movie is the \"Exit\" that I watched last year. It\'s a disaster movie about the explosion of gas. The actor was so good at acting that it was pitiful and funny and thrilling throughout the movie. My beloved actor Jo Jung-seok played the main character.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! This was a great essay although I need you to focus more on you sentence construction and usage of your punctuations marks. Keep up the good work. :)

-Teacher Elise


If there is a movie that the children want to watch, we go to the theater together.
>>CORRECT 

It takes about 10 minutes from my home. 
>> CORRECT 

Usually, we watch animation. 
>> CORRECT

While the children watch a movie, I sleep next to them. 
>> CORRECT

Children\'s movies are usually a little boring, right? 
>> CORRECT

After watching a movie, we eat at the nearby food court and come home.
>> CORRECT

My favorite genre is a disaster movie or a comic action movie. 
>> My favorite genre is disaster movies or comic action movies.

When I was young, I preferred thriller or horror. 
>>CORRECT

I can\'t see a movie that makes me nervous right now. 
>> I can\'t see movies that makes me nervous nowadays. 

After watching a disaster movie or comic action, the stress accumulated from work and housework disappears.
>> CORRECT

The most memorable movie is the \"Exit\" that I watched last year.
>> The most memorable movie I watched last year is \"Exit\"

It\'s a disaster movie about the explosion of gas. 
>>CORRECT

The actor was so good at acting that it was pitiful and funny and thrilling throughout the movie. 
>>The actor was so good at acting that it was pitiful, funny and thrilling throughout the movie. 

My beloved actor Jo Jung-seok played the main character.
>> CORRECT

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