Movie 2
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His brain surgery failed but he didn't look back when someone called his virtual self’ Teddy’.
There are two reason that I recommended this movie.
One of them is that Andrew`s will. He wanted to return his original state living rather than live with a monster, Teddy. The other is the existence of Rachel. She was a person of the same name with the woman who caused him to suffer a mental illness. Live as a monster, or die as a good man.
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His brain surgery failed but he didn\'t look back when someone called his virtual self’ Teddy’.
>> correct!
There are two reason that I recommended this movie.
>> There are two reasons why I recommended this movie.
One of them is that Andrew`s will. He wanted to return his original state living rather than live with a monster, Teddy.
>> One of them is Andrew`s will. He wanted to return to his original state rather than live with a monster, Teddy.
The other is the existence of Rachel.
>> correct!
She was a person of the same name with the woman who caused him to suffer a mental illness.
>> She has the same name with the woman who caused him to suffer a mental illness.
Live as a monster, or die as a good man.
>> correct!
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