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I watched a movie with my sister. The title of the movie was 'Inception' which a leading actor is Dicaprio. While I watched the movie throughout the time, I couldn't untie the string of tension. The main story is that main actor is to steal and plant other people's idea and thought passing through their dream,unconsciousness. The man dreams to come true his goal and plant his idea passing through other people's dream. At first, he dreams in the real world.Then he dreams in a dream world and dreams 3 levels of dream world again. I would like to respect the director 's imagination power.

Thanks for drafting another essay, Nickey! I appreciate your time and effort in making this. Now, here are my grammar suggestions. I hope you use them always. Keep it up!   I watched a movie with my sister. >>Correct. The title of the movie was 'Inception' which a leading actor is Dicaprio. >> The title of the movie was 'Inception' which the leading actor is de Caprio. While I watched the movie throughout the time, I couldn't untie the string of tension. >>Correct. (Good sentence construction!) The main story is that main actor is to steal and plant other people's idea and thought passing through their dream,unconsciousness. >> The main story is that the main actor is to steal and plant other people's idea though passing their dream or unconsciousness. The man dreams to come true his goal and plant his idea passing through other people's dream. >> The man dreams his goal to come true and plant his idea passing through other people's dreams. At first, he dreams in the real world. Then he dreams in a dream world and dreams 3 levels of dream world again. >> Then he dreams in a dream world and dreams 3 levels of dream worlds again. I would like to respect the director뭩 imagination power. >> Correct.