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A few days ago, I bought a book. The title of the book is Scorch Trial.
It is one of the series of the Maze Runner.
Last year, I saw the movie, Maze runner. Then I was so impressed about the story and actors in that movie.
So I expect the Second Movie, Scorch Trial.
On Sep 17, release Scorch Trial.
Before the releasing, I wanted to read original edition.
So I bought it and read, but it was so difficult to me.
How can I read the book before Sep. 17 ?
How can it be funny ?
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A few days ago, I bought a book. The title of the book is Scorch Trial.
>> CORRECT
OR>> Lately, I bought a book. The title of the book is Scorch Trial.
It is one of the series of the Maze Runner.
>> It is one of the series of the book Maze Runner.
Last year, I saw the movie, Maze runner.
>> Last year, I saw the movie of Maze runner.
Then I was so impressed about the story and actors in that movie.
>> Then I was so impressed about the story and the actors in that movie.
So I expect the Second Movie, Scorch Trial.
>> So I am expecting the second movie, Scorch Trial.
On Sep 17, release Scorch Trial.
>> The release of the Scorch Trial will be on Sept. 17.
Before the releasing, I wanted to read original edition.
>> Before the release, I wanted to read the original edition.
So I bought it and read, but it was so difficult to me.
>> So I bought and read it but it was so difficult for me to understand.
How can I read the book before Sep. 17 ?
>> How can I finish reading the book before Sept. 17?
How can it be funny ?
>> Do I sound funny?
~~This is your first time to submit me your homework. Good Job! I felt excited. Thank you so much!
~~I hope you will continue showing your interest in learning English.
A few days ago, I bought a book. The title of the book is Scorch Trial.
>> CORRECT
OR>> Lately, I bought a book. The title of the book is Scorch Trial.
It is one of the series of the Maze Runner.
>> It is one of the series of the book Maze Runner.
Last year, I saw the movie, Maze runner.
>> Last year, I saw the movie of Maze runner.
Then I was so impressed about the story and actors in that movie.
>> Then I was so impressed about the story and the actors in that movie.
So I expect the Second Movie, Scorch Trial.
>> So I am expecting the second movie, Scorch Trial.
On Sep 17, release Scorch Trial.
>> The release of the Scorch Trial will be on Sept. 17.
Before the releasing, I wanted to read original edition.
>> Before the release, I wanted to read the original edition.
So I bought it and read, but it was so difficult to me.
>> So I bought and read it but it was so difficult for me to understand.
How can I read the book before Sep. 17 ?
>> How can I finish reading the book before Sept. 17?
How can it be funny ?
>> Do I sound funny?
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