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I changed the question\' subject book to movie since it\'ll be much better to talk about the movie. If I could see only one movie for my entire life, I\'ll watch LionKing. Among lots of movies that I\'d seen, LionKing was the best movie. I saw that firstly when I was about 5 years old. At that time, I don\' know exactly about the lesson of the movie and what the director want to say, so I jusy enjoy watching for animation. I assume that I liked animal at that time. I watched the movie when I was seven years old, I could understand what lions are good and what are bad. Also, I could feel sadness when the Moopasa dad. Like this, as I grow, I can learn many things in the movie
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I changed the question\' subject book to movie since it\'ll be much better to talk about the movie.
>> I changed the subject since it will be much better to about a movie.
If I could see only one movie for my entire life, I\'ll watch LionKing.
>> If I could see only one movie for my entire life, I\'ll watch The Lion King.
Among lots of movies that I\'d seen, LionKing was the best movie.
>> Among the movies I\'ve seen, The Lion King is the best movie.
I saw that firstly when I was about 5 years old.
>> I was that first when I was about 5 years old.
At that time, I don\' know exactly about the lesson of the movie and what the director want to say, so I jusy enjoy watching for animation.
>> At that time, I didn\'t know exactly about the lesson of the movie and what the director wanted to convey, so I just enjoyed watching it because it was an animation movie.
I assume that I liked animal at that time.
>> I assume that I liked animals at that time.
I watched the movie when I was seven years old, I could understand what lions are good and what are bad.
>> I watched the movie when I was 7 years old and I understood who the good lions were and the bad ones.
Also, I could feel sadness when the Moopasa dad.
>> I also felt the sorrow when Mufasa died.
Like this, as I grow, I can learn many things in the movie
>> It\'s like this, as I grow up, I learn a lot of things from watching it.
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