Movie

2019-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

I watched \'Toy story 4\' with my friends recently. The movie was funny and interesting. Because characters are very cute and smart. I like Woody and Buzz!! They are real friend and think their owner is a valued friend. I thought Toys don\'t speak but they are precious.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ellen! ^ ^ Thank you so much for this homework. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^ I love this movie too! It reminds me so much of my childhood. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I watched \'Toy story 4\' with my friends recently.

>>Correct
The movie was funny and interesting.

>>Correct
Because characters are very cute and smart.

>>The characters are so adorable and smart too!
I like Woody and Buzz!!

>>Correct

They are real friend and think their owner is a valued friend.

>>They are real friends and considers their owner as a valued friend.
I thought Toys don\'t speak but they are precious.

>>Correct

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