Movie review

2010-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Karen

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The movie 'Uncle' is released last week. I really expected this movie, because the main actor is my favorite. He finished the army service and I think he is improved physically and imotionally. Before this movie, I just knew a little about the movie. One of my cowokers said to me this movie was really cold blooded. It was really good more than I expected. Especially, action scenes were active and cool. The story was also great and impressive. Some scenes were cruel, so I didn't watch some. However it wasn't that cruel, I would like to recommend this.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for sending me a movie review! I really enjoy reading your compositions.  I would love to watch 'Uncle'. I love watching movies like you do. I wonder if the movie has an English subtitle though so I can understand it.  See you in class!  __t. Karen__   Here are my corrections for you: The movie 'Uncle' is released last week. >>The movie 'Uncle' was released last week. I really expected this movie, because the main actor is my favorite. >>Correct! He finished the military service and I think he  improved physically and imotionally. >>He finished the army service and I think he is improved physically and emotionally. [Be careful with your spelling] Before this movie, I just knew a little about the movie. >>Before the release, I just knew a little about the movie. One of my cowokers said to me this movie was really cold blooded. >>Correct!It was really good more than I expected. >>Correct!Especially, action scenes were active and cool. >>Especially the action scenes which were active and cool.The story was also great and impressive. >>Correct!Some scenes were cruel, so I didn't watch some. >>Some scenes were cruel though so I didn't watch some.However it wasn't that cruel, I would like to recommend this. >>However it wasn't all that cruel. I would like to recommend this.

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