Movie review
학생이 쓴 원문
The movie 'Uncle' is released last week.
I really expected this movie, because the main actor is my favorite.
He finished the army service and I think he is improved physically and imotionally.
Before this movie, I just knew a little about the movie.
One of my cowokers said to me this movie was really cold blooded.
It was really good more than I expected.
Especially, action scenes were active and cool.
The story was also great and impressive.
Some scenes were cruel, so I didn't watch some.
However it wasn't that cruel, I would like to recommend this.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for sending me a movie review! I really enjoy reading your compositions. I would love to watch 'Uncle'. I love watching movies like you do. I wonder if the movie has an English subtitle though so I can understand it. See you in class!
__t. Karen__
Here are my corrections for you:
The movie 'Uncle' is released last week.
>>The movie 'Uncle' was released last week.
I really expected this movie, because the main actor is my favorite.
>>Correct!
He finished the military service and I think he improved physically and imotionally.
>>He finished the army service and I think he is improved physically and emotionally. [Be careful with your spelling]
Before this movie, I just knew a little about the movie.
>>Before the release, I just knew a little about the movie.
One of my cowokers said to me this movie was really cold blooded.
>>Correct!It was really good more than I expected.
>>Correct!Especially, action scenes were active and cool.
>>Especially the action scenes which were active and cool.The story was also great and impressive.
>>Correct!Some scenes were cruel, so I didn't watch some.
>>Some scenes were cruel though so I didn't watch some.However it wasn't that cruel, I would like to recommend this.
>>However it wasn't all that cruel. I would like to recommend this.
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