movie time!
학생이 쓴 원문
I think, The best time of watching movie is midnight or after 10pm.
That Time is time to sleep the whole world. Outside will be a dark world and If I turn off the lamp. my living room will be a cinema
When I moving here, I bought a new television.
That is 65 inch. It is a big size to watching Evening News .
But I can concentrative more than watching movie.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ethan!
Wow, what a fantastic 65-inch tv to enjoy when the world out there is dark after being weary. I agree that this time, when you watch a movie, you may start falling asleep as well. ^^ Well, it always depends on the movie that you are watching whether it is an interesting one or not. Anyway, happy viewing the next time you get to watch a movie!
I am grateful for this effort of doing your homework. Very good!
See you in class soon!
-T. Donna =)
I think, The best time of watching movie is midnight or after 10pm.>> Correct!
Or: I think the best time of watching movie is at midnight or after 10pm.
That Time is time to sleep the whole world. Outside will be a dark world and If I turn off the lamp. my living room will be a cinema
>> That time is the time for the whole world to sleep. Outside will be a dark and If I turn off the lamp. My living room will be a cinema.
When I moving here, I bought a new television.
When I moving here, I bought a new television.
>> When I moved here, I bought a new television.
That is 65 inch. It is a big size to watching Evening News .
>> That is 65-inch. It is a big size to watching evening news.
But I can concentrative more than watching movie.
>> But I can concentrate more on on watching a movie.
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