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<Paddington>
Paddington is released in last year January.Paddington is a cute bear.Paddington is live in Peru.Paddington go to London.Because when the travler met Paddington's uncle the traveler said go to the London.Paddington go to the London and one family allow paddington to sleep one night.But they give a time to Paddington to find the travler.Actually traveler daughter want to kill paddington.Paddington make a mistake and paddington was sorry to Judy's family.So, Paddington leave from the Judy's house.Traveler duaghter met paddington and ready to kill paddington.The Judy's family go to the National London Meuseum and saved the paddington.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
How are you?
That was quite a story about Paddigton.
Thank you so much for sharing about his story.
Share some more. I want to read some of your writings about some certain
characters.
Thank you again.
I will see you in our class.
Have a great day ahead. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
<Paddington>
>> Correct
OR:
>> \"Paddington\"Paddington is released in last year January.
>> Paddington is released in January, last year.
Paddington is a cute bear.
>> Correct
Paddington is live in Peru.
>> Paddington lives in Peru.
Paddington go to London.
>> Paddington goes to London.
Because when the travler met Paddington\'s uncle the traveler said go to the London.
>> Because, when the traveler met Paddington\'s uncle, the traveler said that he was heading to London.
Paddington go to the London and one family allow paddington to sleep one night.
>> Paddington went to London and one family allowed paddington to sleep with them in one night.
But they give a time to Paddington to find the travler.
>> But they gave time to Padington to find the traveler.
Actually traveler daughter want to kill paddington.
>> Actually, the traveler\'s daughter wanted to kill Paddington.
Paddington make a mistake and paddington was sorry to Judy\'s family.
>> Paddington made a mistake and he felt sorry to Judy\'s family.
So, Paddington leave from the Judy\'s house.
>> So, Paddignton left Judy\'s house.
Traveler duaghter met paddington and ready to kill paddington.
>> The traveler\'s daughter met Paddignton and intended to kill Paddington.
The Judy\'s family go to the National London Meuseum and saved the paddington.>> Judy\'s family went to the National London Museum and and saved Paddington.
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