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Both of them have advantages and disadvantages. Also they attract me. Living in one place is comportable and I feel safe. Whereas moving other places is exciting and I can experience new things. So in my opinion, when I have power of moving, it is better to live in different places. After then, when I will be old, it will be better to live in one place especially hometown. So I dream flight attandant of foreign countries. And some years later, I want to come back Korea.

Hello [이름], Happy Tuesday! Good job on your homework! You continue to make better sentences everyday. Just be careful in using prepositions. See you later! -- T. Giselle ^^   Both of them have advantages and disadvantages.>> Correct.Also they attract me.>> Correct. OR: Both of them attract me also.Living in one place is comportable and I feel safe.>> Correct. (Spelling check: comfortable)Whereas moving other places is exciting and I can experience new things.>> Whereas moving to other places is exciting and I can experience new things.So in my opinion, when I have power of moving, it is better to live in different places.>> So in my opinion, when I have the power to move, it is better to live in different places.After then, when I will be old, it will be better to live in one place especially hometown.>> Correct. So I dream flight attandant of foreign countries.>> So I dream of becoming a flight attendant for foreign countries.And some years later, I want to come back Korea. >> And some years later, I want to come back to Korea.