Moving grave

2024-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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It is possible to move graves or urns with ashes from place to place. I don\'t know exactly whether moving grave is associated with a religion, for I have no any religion. And we have seen or heard about moving graves or urns. A few years ago, my relatives moved our great-grand parents\' graves to other places. Some people remove their ancestors\' graves and place the bodies in a charnel house .

강사 첨삭

Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. I asked this question because I am just curious since you mentioned you have to travel far just to visit your parents-in-law\'s graves. But thank you for clarifying in class that there are two siblings of your husband staying in the place where their graves are, so it\'s okay to leave them there.
- T. Caitlyn
It is possible to move graves or urns with ashes from place to place. 
>> CORRECT
I don\'t know exactly whether moving grave is associated with a religion, for I have no any religion. 
>> I don\'t know exactly whether moving graves is associated with a religion, as I don\'t have any religion.
And we have seen or heard about moving graves or urns. 
>> CORRECT
A few years ago, my relatives moved our great-grand parents\' graves to other places. 
>> A few years ago, my relatives moved our great-grandparents\' graves to another place.
Some people remove their ancestors\' graves and place the bodies in a charnel house 
>> CORRECT

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