Mr. [Name]

Mr. [Name] lives in forget-me-not cottage. Mr. [Name] is a very forgetful man. He can't even remember about his message. I will tell you about a story. When Mr. [Name] has forgotten a message for the farmer. It was a day when the sun is [이름]ing and the birds are singing. Mr. [Name] was having a dream. Then Mr. [Name] waked up and he sat up on his bed and try to remember what was his dream. But of course he couldn't remember anything.Then he went to the wordrobe to brush his teeth. And went to the kitchen and ate burn toast and hard boiled egg for breakfast.Then he went outside and there was a police officer. And he asked Mr. [Name] to tell the farmer there's a sheep loose in the lane.And of course he forgotten.So poor Mr. [Name] went back to his home. Then he triped over to a sheep and fell over.dn'And he rember his message and went back to the farmer and draged him where the sheep was.Then he went to his house trying rember what happend that day. but couldnt.

Hello Ji[이름]! I\'m delighted that you found the composition page in our website. This is a fascinating story, by the way. I want you to check my corrections below. Please take note of the proper verb tenses, punctuation marks and transition words in your writing. You did an incredible job here! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~   Mr. [Name] lives in forget-me-not cottage. >> CORRECT! Mr. [Name] is a very forgetful man. >> CORRECT!  He can\'t even remember about his message. >> He can\'t even remember his own message.I will tell you about a story. >> CORRECT! When Mr. [Name] has forgotten a message for the farmer. >> CORRECT! OR >> This happened when Mr. [Name] has forgotten a message for the farmer. - better It was a day when the sun is [이름]ing and the birds are singing. >> It was a day when the sun was [이름]ing and the birds were singing. Mr. [Name] was having a dream. >> CORRECT! Then Mr. [Name] waked up and he sat up on his bed and try to remember what was his dream. >> Mr. [Name] suddenly woke up and he sat up on his bed and tried to remember what his dream was. But of course he couldn\'t remember anything. >> CORRECT! OR >> But, of course, he couldn\'t remember anything. Then he went to the wordrobe to brush his teeth. >> He went to the bathroom to brush his teeth. And went to the kitchen and ate burn toast and hard boiled egg for breakfast. >> After that, he went to the kitchen and ate burnt toast and hardboiled egg for breakfast. Then he went outside and there was a police officer. >> CORRECT! And he asked Mr. [Name] to tell the farmer there\'s a sheep loose in the lane. >> He asked Mr. [Name] to tell the farmer that there is an escaped sheep in the road.  And of course he forgotten. >> Of course, he forgot about it. So poor Mr. [Name] went back to his home. >> So, poor Mr. [Name] went back home. Then he triped over to a sheep and fell over.dn\' >> Then he tripped over a sheep and fell down. And he rember his message and went back to the farmer and draged him where the sheep was. >> He suddenly remembered the message, so he went to see the farmer and dragged him to where the sheep was. Then he went to his house trying rember what happend that day. but couldnt. >> After that, he went back to his house and tried to remember what happened that day, but he couldn\'t.