Ms. [Name]!!! Don't call me, Today!.

2013-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Ms. [Name]. I'm sorry that please don't call me today. Y_Y I din't bring my cellphonr again. I got up very late. so I was so confused in this morning. When I arrived in the office, I realize that I put my T-shirts on back to front. And now, I can't find my cellphone. It's so busy day... Have a good weekend and see you next monday.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name] [이름]! 

So sorry but even if you tell me that I don\'t have to call you, I still ahve to. 

It is on our policy since you did not postpone or hold your class. 

So sorry. :(

Oh my! You really have a reversed t-shirt when you went to the office. 

That\'s embarrassing my dear. kkk

I hope that other people did not notice. 

Because if they did, oh my, I don\'t know what would I feel about it. 

I hope your fine. 
See you on Monday. 

Enjoy your weekend! 


Always, 
Kathrine ^^



Good afternoon, Ms. [Name].

>> correct! 

I\'m sorry that please don\'t call me today. Y_Y

>> I\'m sorry but please don\'t call me today. Y.Y

I din\'t bring my cellphonr again.

>> correct! spelling correction (didn\'t, cellphone)

I got up very late.

>> correct! 

so I was so confused in this morning.

>> So I was so confused this morning. 

When I arrived in the office, I realize that I put my T-shirts on back to front.

>> When I arrived in the office, I realized that I put on my T-shirt on a reversed side. 

And now, I can\'t find my cellphone.

>> correct! 

It\'s so busy day...

>>  correct! 

Have a good weekend and see you next monday.

>> correct! (capitalization-Monday)

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