MSN Talking
학생이 쓴 원문
Following is my MSN talking with teamate today.
Pls revise for my talking. Name is [이름]
Pls tell to Keming send mail to me.
I will reply for the mail.
I think Keming is good supplier for us.
I want to slove this problem very smoothly.
However..it is not our fault.
They can not push us.
They delay too many times.
As I heard from Seraphy..
this customer use this product continuously..
I think we can try to sell it.
they have to wait some time I think.
I don't belive it.^^
Pls tell to the sales.
Send me mail
I will reply
We can not guarantee 100%
however we try to sell it..
this is our best
강사 첨삭
Hello there!^^
Thank you so much for sending me a composition...
Feel free to send your composition and I'll do my best to support you all through out..
T.Jane
Following is my MSN talking with teamate today.
>>Following is my MSN conversation with my team mate today.Pls revise for my talking. Name is [이름]
>>Please revise my conversation with her. Her name is [이름].Pls tell to Keming send mail to me.
>>Please tell Keming to send me an email.I will reply for the mail.
>>I will reply to her mail right away.I think Keming is good supplier for us.
>>I think Keming is a good supplier to us.I want to slove this problem very smoothly.
>>I want to solve this problem smoothly.However..it is not our fault.
>>correct!They can not push us.
>>They can't force us.They delay too many times.
>>They have delayed it too many times.As I heard from Seraphy..
>>correct!this customer use this product continuously..
>>This customer used this product continuously.I think we can try to sell it.
>>correct!they have to wait some time I think.
>>I think they have to wait for some time.I don't belive it.^^
>>correct!Pls tell to the sales.
>>Please tell it to the sales.Send me mail
>>Send me an e-mailI will reply
>>I will reply to the e-mail. We can not guarantee 100%
>>correct!however we try to sell it..
>>correct!this is our best
>>correct!
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