MSN Talking

2010-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Following is my MSN talking with teamate today. Pls revise for my talking. Name is [이름] Pls tell to Keming send mail to me. I will reply for the mail. I think Keming is good supplier for us. I want to slove this problem very smoothly. However..it is not our fault. They can not push us. They delay too many times. As I heard from Seraphy.. this customer use this product continuously.. I think we can try to sell it. they have to wait some time I think. I don't belive it.^^ Pls tell to the sales. Send me mail I will reply We can not guarantee 100% however we try to sell it.. this is our best

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Hello there!^^ Thank you so much for sending me a composition... Feel free to send your composition and I'll do my best to support you all through out.. T.Jane   Following is my MSN talking with teamate today. >>Following is my MSN conversation with my team mate today.Pls revise for my talking. Name is [이름] >>Please revise my conversation with her. Her name is [이름].Pls tell to Keming send mail to me. >>Please tell Keming to send me an email.I will reply for the mail. >>I will reply to her mail right away.I think Keming is good supplier for us. >>I think Keming is a good supplier to us.I want to slove this problem very smoothly. >>I want to solve this problem smoothly.However..it is not our fault. >>correct!They can not push us. >>They can't force us.They delay too many times. >>They have delayed it too many times.As I heard from Seraphy.. >>correct!this customer use this product continuously.. >>This customer used this product continuously.I think we can try to sell it. >>correct!they have to wait some time I think. >>I think they have to wait for some time.I don't belive it.^^ >>correct!Pls tell to the sales. >>Please tell it to the sales.Send me mail >>Send me an e-mailI will reply >>I will reply to the e-mail. We can not guarantee 100% >>correct!however we try to sell it.. >>correct!this is our best >>correct!

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