Music
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What is the importance of music in keeping your country\'s cultural heritage alive?
My country has our own music and musical instruments for example gugak, pansori, janggu etc. These are considered our ethnic and soul is in these. But nowadays many people are indifferent to traditional music. Because It sounds like the old. But even though it is far away from today, traditional music reflects a country\'s culture and history. And it makes us feel ethnic identity. So we should keep our tradition. Like Yuna kim who is a korean figure skater chose Korean traditional music as her program song.
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Question: What is the importance of music in keeping your country\'s cultural heritage alive?
Your Answer: My country has our own music and musical instruments for example gugak, pansori, janggu etc. These are considered our ethnic and soul is in these. But nowadays many people are indifferent to traditional music. Because It sounds like the old. But even though it is far away from today, traditional music reflects a country\'s culture and history. And it makes us feel ethnic identity. So we should keep our tradition. Like Yuna kim who is a korean figure skater chose Korean traditional music as her program song.
>> My country has its own music and musical instruments for example gugak, pansori, janggu etc. These are considered part of our ethnic culture and soul. But nowadays, many people are indifferent to traditional music, because it sounds old. Even though many years have passed already, traditional music still reflects our country\'s culture and history, and it makes us feel our ethnic identity. So we should keep our tradition, like Yuna Kim, a Korean figure skater who chose Korean traditional music as her program song.
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Great answer and explanation! :)
See you later in class!
~Miya^^
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