Music

I enjoy listening to music. It makes me feel relaxed and happy. I usually listen to K-pop and pop songs after school. When I feel tired or sad, music gives me energy. Listening to music is the best way for me to enjoy my free time.

Hi Jenny,

I’m so glad you did your homework! You wrote clearly and shared your feelings about music so nicely. I can really feel how much you love listening to songs, it’s such a wonderful way to relax and feel happy. I’m proud of you for expressing your thoughts in English so well! Keep it up, and maybe next time you can tell me which K-pop or pop songs are your favorites. You’re doing great, Jenny!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I enjoy listening to music.

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OR>> I love listening to music.

It makes me feel relaxed and happy.

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OR>> It helps me feel calm and joyful.

I usually listen to K-pop and pop songs after school.

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OR>> After school, I often listen to K-pop and pop songs.

When I feel tired or sad, music gives me energy.

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OR>> Music helps me feel better when I’m tired or sad.

Listening to music is the best way for me to enjoy my free time.

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OR>> I think listening to music is the best way to relax.