Music
학생이 쓴 원문
Whenever I feel blue , I like singing songs.
I usually sing ballad song.
When I concentrate on the lyric, I feel as if I were the guy of that song.
So I can forget my bad memory.
and I also like singing songs for other people.
When I had a girlfriend, I would sing beautiful songs for her.
Sometimes I did it in order to seduce some girls.
and I have experiences that I sang songs on the stage.
I was so nervous, but at the same time It was an
very exciting experience.
강사 첨삭
I know what you mean.:) Hear are your corrections: -Teacher JM
Whenever I feel blue , I like singing songs.>>>Correct^^I usually sing ballad song.>>>I usually sing ballad songs.When I concentrate on the lyric, I feel as if I were the guy of that song.>>>Whenever I concentrate on the lyrics, I would feel as if I were the real singer of that song.So I can forget my bad memory.and I also like singing songs for other people.>>>I like emoting while singing so that I can forget some bad memories that I have. I also like singing songs for other people.When I had a girlfriend, I would sing beautiful songs for her.>>>Correct^^Sometimes I did it in order to seduce some girls.and I have experiences that I sang songs on the stage.>>>Sometimes I did it in order to seduce some girls. I even had some experiences that I sang songs on the stage.I was so nervous, but at the same time It was anvery exciting experience>>>I was so nervous but it was a very exciting experience at the same time.
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