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Actually, I didn't like to listen to music when i was young. becasue i have no talent at music. especially at singing. when I was a student, I hate to sing alone front of classmates. I am tone deafness. also I don't like to go to a singing room. After I've had a job, i had to attend at dining together. Korean like to go to a singing room after dining together. To me the time is suffering. nowdays I enjoy to listen music and I sing a song when take a rest alone. it's a good to me i could gain mp3 file in the internet without efford to visit off line shop. To overcome my tone deafness I will endeavor to change my mind. I will be venturing into sing a song at singing room!.sorry for absent our class.ㅠ ㅠ I was in the important neeting at that time. it happened without my forecast.

  Hi [이름] here are your corrections for your composition:   Actually, I didn't like to listen to music when i was young. becasue i have no talent at music. especially at singing. >>> Actually, I didn't like to listen to music when I was young because I have no talent in music especially in singing. when I was a student, I hate to sing alone front of classmates. >>> When I was a student,I hate yo sing alone in front of my classmates.  I am tone deafness. also I don't like to go to a singing room. >>> I have tone deafness and I also don't like to go to singing rooms.  After I've had a job, i had to attend at dining together. >>>  After I've had a job, i have to attend dinner meetings. Korean like to go to a singing room after dining together. >>> Koreans like to go to singing rooms after dinner meetings. To me the time is suffering. >>>To me those times are excruciating.  nowdays I enjoy to listen music and I sing a song when take a rest alone. >>> Nowadays I enjoy listening to music and sing songs when I take a rest alone.  it's a good to me i could gain mp3 file in the internet without efford to visit off line shop. >>> It's good  that I could download mp3 files from the internet without effort instead of going to music stores.  To overcome my tone deafness I will endeavor to change my mind.---correct  I will be venturing into sing a song at singing room!. >>> I will be venturing into singing songs in karaoke bars (singing rooms) sorry for absent our class. >>> Sorry for being absent in class.  ㅠ I was in the important neeting at that time. it happened without my forecast. >>> I was in an importaant meeting at that time. I didnt expect it.