Music
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There are lots of types of musics as well.
My favourite music is 'Apink,Remeber.'
There are pop music and classic music.
Names of example pop music:apink remeber,apink mr chu,apink no no no.
I don't actualy know any names of classic music because I don't listen to any songs of classic music.My dad likes classic music,my mom likes pop music,my brother likes pop music and I like pop music.Do you like popmusic, Teacher Mayleen?
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Hi there Emma!:)
Happy Friday to you!
Emma, you\'re a Pink Panda!^_- That is the fandom name for A-pink, did you know that?
Yes, I do like pop music too. I like American pop songs. I like Korean pop songs, too.
I like songs by Bruno Mars and Adelle. As for Kpop, I like songs by IU and WINNER.
I also know the A-pink songs that you mentioned. No,No,No made them popular, am I right? If you\'re an A-pink fan then who is your favorite member?
My younger sister likes A-pink too and her favorite member is Eunji.^___^
Thank you for this composition, Emma. Good job. Just be careful not to make your sentences redundant. I\'ve made some modifications, okay?:p
See you in class. Good night!
~Teacher Mayleen~
There are lots of types of musics as well.
>> There are many different types of music.
My favourite music is \'Apink,Remeber.\'
>> My favorite song is Remember by A-pink.
There are pop music and classic music.
>> Examples of types of music are pop music and classical music.Names of example pop music:apink remeber,apink mr chu,apink no no no.
>> Other pop songs from A-pink aside from Remember are Mr. [Name] and No,No,No.I don\'t actualy know any names of classic music because I don\'t listen to any songs of classic music.
>> I don\'t know any classical song because I don\'t listen to classical music.
My dad likes classic music,my mom likes pop music,my brother likes pop music and I like pop music.
>> My dad likes classical music while my mom, my brother, and I like po music.
Do you like popmusic, Teacher Mayleen?
>> Do you like pop music, Teacher Mayleen?
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